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September 2, 2024

Some time ago, when I read about the shooting in Ottawa’s parliament, it reminded me of a trip my husband and I took to that city a few years ago. When most people think of Eastern Canada’s major cities, cosmopolitan Montreal and culturally diverse Toronto come to mind. Rarely do they think of Ottawa, Canada’s capital. But it has many charms, as interesting a place to visit as the country’s more popular destinations. Dignified with old world qualities, Ottawa is a handsome, stately place that also has a dual personality. It resides across the river from Hull, Quebec, its sister city, highlighting Canada’s bilingual nature of English and French. For me, a Canadian by birth, I’m grateful to have that heritage. (more…)

I’m grieving the loss of dictionaries, thick, massive volumes that I used to get lost in. I would open a page and find hundreds of words, all of them demanding my attention, each a miniature world to explore. But now I’ve become a victim of on-line lexicons because they are handier than putting aside my laptop computer and marching into the other room to unload the Oxford from a bookshelf where it resides. (more…)

 

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I’ve been thinking how writers are like detectives. Constantly observant, they pick up clues from what people are wearing, how they gesture, the words they speak, the way they interact with others. They study others’ facial expressions and what they suggest, storing away the data in their memory banks or taking notes in a writer’s journal that they’ll refer to later. (more…)

A Praise Song to Human Editors

Will Chatty GPT ever learn to edit itself?

As I wrote in my last post, AI is extremely chatty. Any writer who’s received one of those spam messages urging you to connect with a famous author or get a book promotion package you never requested, will see that the fulsome praise of your work can take an entire page not to mention minutes of your precious time. Recently, I got an invitation from an AI generated scam focused on editing my published picture book Lucy and Henry Are Twins. The scam email is 144 words longer than the entire text of the book including the title. (How and why I would want to edit a published book is a mystery to me.)

Original art by Jane Massey

I have been publishing traditionally for (eek) fifty years and through all those decades, I have been both challenged and supported by dedicated editors who love stories and readers, and who have spent their lives making good books better.

I sent my most recent manuscript, the fourth in my series that began with The Castle in the Attic, to Margery, the editor who has worked with me on the series from the beginning and who is a talented and prolific children’s book writer herself.

Original art by Trina Schart Hyman

Margery knows all my quirks and with great patience, she points them out to me every time. She and I both prefer the penciled line edit to a digital program, so here is a sample of one of the more lightly touched pages.

I use the words just and even too often. I repeat words usually in the same paragraph and occasionally, in the same sentence. She cuts my unnecessary explanations, my long descriptive passages, and urges me to replace pronouns with the characters’ names. She is alert to my continuity issues. (Ex. See p. 88, line 8. William knows that Tolliver is not around.)

But more than that, she is attuned to what I’m trying to achieve in the story and how best to help me realize it. As every good editor knows, the way to get a writer back to the page with a sense of energy and excitement is first and foremost to tell them what they are doing right, what in the manuscript is working. I happen to love the revision process because I know it’s my opportunity to get closer to my original vision for the book. Once I’ve taken the time to absorb what she is saying, Margery’s editorial letters always send me back to page one with enthusiasm.

Every experienced writer knows that we are our own worst editors. We fall in love with our characters, our settings, our descriptions and when we type THE END on the bottom of the page/screen, there is a feeling of such joy and achievement that we have little objectivity left. That’s why I try to take weeks if not months away from the book to let it rest. With time off and the help of an editor like Margery, I’m able to see my work more clearly and cut more drastically so that the story moves as swiftly as it needs to do in this age of short attention spans.

Will AI replace the human editor? Many feel it already has, but I’m not one of them. AI is a mathematical tool without conscious awareness, an inner life or lived experience. Those are the qualities I look for in the editor casting her eye and wielding her pencil over my hard won words.

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Meet Karen Garloch, a first-time author and an award-winning journalist. She worked at newspapers in Ohio for fourteen years before moving to the Charlotte Observer in 1987. She spent thirty years at the Observer as the
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health reporter and was a finalist for the 2013 Pulitzer Prize in Local Reporting. After retirement, she wrote the novel Stray Voltage, which won the 2024 Petrichor Prize for Finely Crafted Fiction from Regal House Publishing. A native of Jackson County, Garloch is a graduate of Brownstown Central High School and Ball State University, where she is a member of the Journalism Hall of Fame. She and her husband, Larry, live in Charlotte, N.C.

 

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I’m thinking this morning of when my husband and I returned from a couple of nights in Calistoga, a charming town in California’s Napa Valley. Yes, it has its share of upwardly mobile types who go there to visit the many wineries. But there also are others who need to be replenished by the pastoral setting and many opportunities to take walks in the surrounding hills. I need that uplift today. (more…)

For everybody except those hiding under a rock, it’s impossible to avoid AI these days. As I wrote recently, my first job in the morning entails clearing my inbox of a number of AI generated “offers” to promote my work, host me on a podcast, connect to me as a fellow writer (imagine Stephen King, Garrison Keillor or Frederik Backman reaching out to little old me), sponsor me at a book festival, feature me on book clubs with names like Boozy Book Club, Books Before Breakast and Women Love Books, etc. etc. All of these are written by AI and sent out to eager writers around the world in an effort to get them to pay for these fake services. Because I’ve published over sixty books for readers of all ages, I get more than my share of them. (more…)

Where do the ideas come from for your narratives?

I write historical fiction based on real people, typically people forgotten by history. I’ve discovered these people by mining a variety of sources, including historical societies, genealogy records, biographies, and nonfiction books about interesting times and people. I’m always on the lookout for people who would lend themselves to a good story, and my six published novels showcase a varied cast of characters, including a woman who was a model for Coco Chanel and then became a spy for the Allies during World War II (The Model Spy); a young couple on a headline-grabbing crime spree in 1920s Brooklyn (Gun Girl and the Tall Guy); and a spiritualist who tangled with Harry Houdini (Margery and Me).

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I’m grateful to Al Sirois, a fellow Regal House author, for sharing with us his writing journey.

Hi, Al. What genres do you work in?

Science fiction, fantasy, mysteries, horror… Young Adult & Middle Grade. (more…)

On July 4th, 2026, the 250th anniversary of the founding of our country, the Theodore Roosevelt Library will open in Medora, North Dakota. Although I can’t be there in person, I will be there in spirit as it’s the best way I can imagine to celebrate all about my country that I love. (more…)

Michael Loyd Gray is the author of ten published books of fiction and more than sixty published short stories. His story collection, The Space Between Now and Then, was released in May 2026 by Silent Clamor. His novel The Writer in Residence was released in April 2026. Regal House will release his novel Emperor of the Mundane in 2027. Gray is the winner of the 2008 Sol Books Prose Series Prize, the 2005 Alligator Juniper Fiction Prize, the 2005 Writers Place Award for Fiction, and a fiction support grant from the Elizabeth George Foundation. He earned a MFA from Western Michigan University, where he was a Phi Kappa Phi National Honor Society Scholar, and a bachelor’s degree from the University of Illinois. Gray lives in Kalamazoo, Michigan, with three cats and a lot of electric guitars. (more…)

Since my late 20s, I’ve recorded my dreams every morning, curious about the wonderful dramas that unfold each night in the subterranean depths. During a trip we took a while back to Osoyoos, B.C., I got a better understanding of dreams and the role they play in our lives. (more…)

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I’ve been thinking recently how writers are like detectives. They constantly need to be observant, picking up clues from what people are wearing, how they gesture, the words they speak, the way they interact with others. They study others’ facial expressions and what they suggest, storing away the data in their memory banks or taking notes in a writer’s journal that they’ll refer to later. (more…)

I recall returning home a while back after spending time at a recently built rental home on the Oxnard, California, beach. It had a wonderful view overlooking the harbor and ocean. You might think I would miss the incredible views and location, as well as the house, brimming with technological toys. But I didn’t. It was a relief to return to our simple Richmond abode, built in the 1940s. (more…)

As a young woman in the 50s growing up in Canada, I was intrigued by hockey and football. Baseball didn’t exist for me then. It hadn’t entered Canadian consciousness, and it would take some years before it did. But I didn’t feel deprived. Hockey and football had much to offer at that time, including handsome, vigorous guys. (more…)

Being part of an on-line writing group for several years provided me with many benefits. But the positives also produced a few negatives.

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Huge thanks to Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop for this excellent piece on “How, What and When Book Authors Get Paid”

The Royal(ty) Lesson

I’m reposting this newsletter that I sent out over a year ago in case some of my newer readers missed it. I continue to get questions on the royalty system, both in traditional publishing, and in the newer forms from independent presses to hybrid to self-publishing. I hope this math lesson helps a little to clarify matters.

I’ve learned over the years that many readers, fans and beginning writers think that published authors get rich really fast especially if they produce a number of books. I thought this might be a perfect opportunity for a little reality check in the form of a math lesson. Now that I’ve looked closely at these numbers, I admit to feeling some sympathy for publishers.

Most traditional office workers are paid twice a month and if they’re lucky, they have benefits like health insurance. Writers publishing with traditional publishers are paid twice a year, April 1st and October 1st. (Amazon pays you monthly if you self-publish or if you publish with one of their book divisions.) Needless to say, you have no obvious job benefits although working for yourself from home has advantages (and challenges) as many workers discovered during the pandemic.

My memoir DAUGHTER OF SPIES, Wartime Secrets, Family Lies was published by a small award-winning, women-owned independent press. Always before, I have published with one of what we call in the “biz,” the big 5.  Names you’d recognize like Random House, Viking, Henry Holt, Macmillan and so on. Those publishers give you an advance and then pay you a royalty based on the list price. If the book costs $20 and you’re getting 10%, you’re receiving $2.00 per copy sold. In the end with high discounts to booksellers and freight pass through clauses (don’t ask!) and various other tweaks, many of the copies don’t deliver that kind of royalty to the author but we’ll leave that aside for now. One more note. The advance is an interest free loan that doesn’t need to be returned if you don’t “earn out.” (See this link for a post by Lincoln Michel on calculating when your book will earn out.) Every time you sell a book, that royalty is deducted from the advance. If you negotiated a $5000 advance and you’re getting $2.00 a copy, you’ll first need to sell 2500 copies in order to earn out and see any more income from the book.

An independent press rarely pays you an advance which means you start earning money from the first book sold although you still get your royalty checks twice a year. In addition, independent presses usually pay you based on the net price of the book, not the price listed on the jacket. Therein lies a tale. And here comes the math lesson.

It costs the publisher $3.48 to print the $17.95 trade paperback book. If the customer is ordering the book through Amazon or at an independent bookseller, those outlets get their copies through a distributor. The distributor passes the book on to the bookseller at a 51% discount ($9.17) because the bookseller needs to buy it at a discount in order to sell it for a profit. The distributor charges a distribution fee of $2.29 a book so the net to the publisher when shipping through the distributor is $3.40 ($9.17 -3.48 -2.29 = $3.40) of which the author receives a percentage, anywhere from 10 to 25% or $.34 to $.85 a book.

I always encourage my readers to order directly from the publishing house website because this is how the numbers work then. It still costs the publisher $3.48 to print the book, but without the distribution fee, shipping and handling per copy comes to $.82 per unit. So, the net to the publisher in this case is $13.65 (17.95 – 3.48 -.82 = $13.65 net.) Royalty to the author depending on the rate she negotiated in her contract runs from $1.63 to $3.41.  Big difference!  But we are all impatient these days and are hooked on Amazon’s swift delivery times so many more readers go that route rather than directly to the publisher’s website. And I’m always happy when readers order through an independent bookseller because I certainly want to keep them in business. Independent bookstores, run by people who really know and love books, represent a vital resource for any community. However unfortunately, buying a book from them doesn’t necessarily result in a better payment to the author.

There are other ways to go these days from self-publishing to hybrid publishing where the author puts up most of the front money and gets paid back when the book sells. I’ve never signed with a hybrid publisher and I’ve only self-published two of my out-of-print novels and one short “kindle” single. Unless you publish regularly (by that I mean at least once a year if not more) and in a niche like self-help or genre fiction as two examples, it’s very hard to get yourself heard above the noise. To put it baldly, it is estimated based on the ISBN numbers sold by Bowker, that 2000 books are published EVERY DAY in the United States. As this article details, the sales of most books are shockingly small and still shrinking. The marketplace is saturated. Consumers are turning to media for their entertainment.

This comment by Courtney Maum, the author and educator, really struck home for me. “Publishers print books. Authors publish them.” How successfully books move in the marketplace now depends almost entirely on the author as publishers have cut their profit margins by reducing their marketing and publicity departments in order to focus their resources on the best-selling authors who bring in the most guaranteed sales.

As E.B. White said, “I admire anybody who has the guts to write anything at all.”

But if you’re a writer, you’re never not writing. You have a place you can go which nobody can take away from you, a world you’re creating that only you can visit. I wouldn’t give that up for anything. Whether you publish or not, whether you make any money from the words you throw down on the page is beside the point when you’re lost in the story. And every six months, that envelope arrives and if you’re lucky, a check falls out.

I’ll give E.B. White the final word.

“The whole duty of a writer is to please himself, and the true writer always plays to an audience of one. Let him start sniffing the air, or glancing at the Trend Machine, and he is as good as dead, although he may make a nice living.”

Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop (www.elizabethwinthropalsop.com) is the author of over 50 works of fiction for adults and children under the pen name Elizabeth Winthrop.  These include the award-winning fantasy series, The Castle in the Attic and The Battle for the Castle as well as the short story, The Golden Darters, read on the nationwide radio program, Selected Shorts,and included in Best American Short Story anthology, and Island Justice and In My Mother’s House, two novels now available as eBooks.  She is the daughter of the acclaimed journalist, Stewart Alsop. Daughter of Spies: Wartime Secrets, Family Lies, a family history about her parents’ love affair during World War II and their marriage lived in the spotlight of Washington during the 1950s was published by Regal House, October 25, 2022.

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