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Onyx wind chimes shaped like birds hang outside my bedroom. Each time a breeze stirs them, their music reminds me of the first trip I took to Mexico. While there, I was hoping to discover a part of the country that photographs can’t capture—the spirit of the place. Lawrence Durrell claims that landscape communicates this aspect. He says, “All landscapes ask the same question in the same whisper, ‘I am watching you—are you watching yourself in me’?” (more…)

I recently reread Henry James’ The Portrait of a Lady and have mixed feelings about the era and the characters. It’s difficult to read about Victorian morés from a 21st Century perspective. Not only do I need lenses that will give me a bi-cultural perspective, but I also feel squashed between a culture clash. Not long after I finished with Portrait, I read a review of A. M. Homes’ book May We Be Forgiven in The New York Review of Books. One of her main characters says, (more…)

I’m remembering a fascinating article I read in the New York Review of Books some time ago about Joseph Cornell. In many ways, he feels like my spiritual father. I love his quirkiness, his living on the periphery, his unique vision. Reading about him makes me want to go out and haunt junk shops for interesting memorabilia to make things with, to start a collection that I can draw from. I had an image of turning an old radio into a kind of Cornell box. (more…)

MEET PROLIFIC AUTHOR MICHAEL C. WHITE WHO TAKES US INSIDE HIS WRITING LIFE IN THIS INTERVIEW!

Michael C. White is the author of seven novels: Soul Catcher (William Morrow), which was a Booksense and Historical Novels Review selection, as well as a finalist for the Connecticut Book Award; A Brother’s Blood (Harper Collins), which was a New York Times Book Review Notable Book, a Barnes and Noble Discover Great New Writers nominee, and an Edgar Award Finalist; The Blind Side of the Heart (Harper Collins), A Dream of Wolves (Harper Collins), and The Garden of Martyrs (St. Martins), also a Connecticut Book Award finalist and made into an opera. His novel Beautiful Assassin (William Morrow) won the 2011 Connecticut Book Award for Fiction.  His last novel, Resting Places, won the $5000 National Tuscany Prize for the Novel and

was recently selected as a runner-up for the Indie Author Project General Fiction Award.  A collection of his short stories, Marked Men, was published by the University of Missouri Press. He has also published over 50 short stories in literary and national magazines. He was the founding editor of the yearly fiction anthologies American Fiction and Dogwood, and was the founder and former director of Fairfield University’s MFA in Creative Writing Program. He lives along the New England coast with his wife Reni and his two Labradors, Falstaff and Lincoln.

Who are your literary influences or inspiration?

Through my undergrad and Ph.D. programs I was influenced, sometime unduly so, by the great American writers in the canon: Melville, Crane, Hemingway, and Faulkner.  I especially found myself in the thrall of the two opposing masters, Hemingway (made a pilgrimage to his grave in Ketcham, Idaho) and Faulkner.  I wrote short cryptic stories in the manner of Hemingway and an entire (bad) novel trying to do a modern, As I Lay Dying, in multiple voices.  For almost two decades I stopped reading or trying to write novels, and tried to learn the craft of short fiction.  I read widely—Melville’s and Crane’s stories, Carver, Bobbie Ann Mason, the great stories of Flannery O’Connor and John Cheever—and published over 50 stories in lit journals.  I even started a couple of lit magazines, one of which is still publishing now.  During this time I read hundreds and later thousands of short stories manuscripts submitted to me.  I found that this was very much a second graduate degree in writing.  I learned both from the good stories, but even more from the not-so-good ones.  Since writing and publishing novels I have learned a great deal from both debut novelists and from those who have published dozens of books. Though I’ve published eight novels, I still try to learn something from every novel I read. They are my best teacher.

Why do you write?

I wish I could say that I was one of those bookish kids that couldn’t wait to open a novel on a rainy day and spend the time reading. But, alas, I was not.  We had no books in my house—I mean none, and not a single bookcase.  Until my senior year in high school, I was a three-sport jock in school.  I yearned not to write the Great American Novel, but to play shortstop for the New York Yankees (I would even have considered the Red Sox).  My father was a farmer, and then a carpenter.  As a little boy I used to go with him to work at his jobsites, and later to earn some money (to see a dramatization of this relationship, check out my novel Skunktown).  My father was a heavy drinker, and during the day as we worked, he would take nips from the pint bottle in his back pocket and tell me stories, tall, Bunyonesque tales of the Vermont woods where he was raised on a farm.  After work, we’d go to some tavern or gin mill, where the drinking and story-telling continued. “What are you drinking?  Tell us a story, Wes,” men would cry out as soon as he entered.  I would sit in some corner booth, sipping a coke, listening and watching as grown, hardscrabble men—electrician and masons and farmers—fell under his sway of his voice.  He continued to tell stories, which got bigger and bolder, as long as they continued to buy drinks for him.  Though I wasn’t bookish at all, I found myself thrilled by my father performance.  I thought to myself: I’d like to do that.  Tell stories that people want to hear.

Tell an anecdote about an interaction between you and one of your more articulate fans.

My second novel, The Blind Side of the Heart, was a story I based loosely on a priest in Western Massachusetts accused of sexual abuse and later of murder. Because of the close connection of my book to the real priest, I got a lot of local publicity as well as letters and emails.  But there was one that shocked me.  I opened the letter and saw that the letterhead said it was from the maximum security men’s prison in Nashua, New Hampshire.  The letter was five, typed, single-spaced page.  I read the first two paragraphs with the delight that comes from an obvious fan of your work.  Even more than that, I was struck by how articulate and educated the writer appeared.  Here was someone who was himself a writer,  I thought.  But as I read on, I realized he wasn’t a professional writer; rather he was a priest, and he liked my book for having captured the interior life of a priest. More than that though, he was struck by how similar my priest’s situation in the book was to that of his own!  By the end of the letter I came to understand that the writer/priest was serving a 35-70 year term for sexually abusing several boys in his congregation.   Like my own character in the novel, he swore that he was innocent.  He told me that a journalist from the Wall Street Journal was investigating his case in the hopes of finding him innocent. He said that since we had so much in common (I debated that) he  wondered if the two of us could meet.  It took eight months to get on his visitor list, but out of curiosity to see my character “in the flesh,” as it were, I finally did and was able meet him.  That was one of the most surprising letters I’d ever receive from one of my readers.

Where do your characters come from?

I usually begin with story and slowly build my characters around the story. However, I often will find characters along the way that are based loosely on people I know.  For instance, in my novel A Dream of Wolves, I based one of the main characters on a woman who was a good friend.  I based the character’s looks on this woman, but most importantly, I used the real woman’s very peculiar laugh for that of my character.  Though having said that I start with story and then find my characters, in my new novel Skunktown, I started with character first.  The main character and narrator, Lyman, was based on my own life, and the father in the novel is based on my father.

How do you start a novel?

As I said previously, I usually start with story, particularly with a kernel of a story. It may be something I read in a newspaper or heard on TV, or it may come from a story someone has told me.  My novel Beautiful Assassin, a novel about Russian female sniper in WWII, started from a snippet of a documentary I heard on TV.  It was about a real sniper named Ludmila Pavlichenko, who had 306 German kills in the war and was invited by Eleanor Roosevelt to the White House.  All of this I used in the novel.  In the first chapter, I put my character in a tree hoping to get a better shot at a fellow German sniper.  This was based on an interview the real sniper gave to an American magazine about one terrifying moment during the war.

Where do your ideas come from for narratives/poems? Do you travel to research your book(s)?

I do a lot of research. Besides, textual research—books and articles—about the subject I’m writing about, I try to visit the places that my characters inhabit.  An example of this is making over twenty trips to northern Maine for my first novel A Brother’s Blood.  Visting a place helps me to see and feel what my character sees and feels.  Besides helping to establish my credibility to write a particular story, I often get ideas about character and plot.  An instance of this was in my novel Soul Catcher, about a slave catcher after a runaway slave.  Since I envisioned my runaway traveling to northern New York to escaped slave encampment—one that John Brown actually lived at and helped to run—I went to North Elba, New York, to see the encampment for myself.  While there, walking the grounds of John Brown’s old farm, I pictured two distinct scenes that would later become chapters.  Also, I decided then and there that John Brown would become a crucial part of my narrative.

We’ve all heard the advice that authors should “write what they know.” But fiction emerges from imagination and creation of new worlds. Do you feel a tension between what you’ve experienced and what lives only in your mind?

If a writer writes only what they know, they are going to find out pretty quickly that they run out of stories to tell. But the “write what you know” dictum is still important because whatever you write about you have to prove to yourself and to your reader that you know the subject and your characters.  I tell my own fiction students to write about what they are passionate about.  And if they don’t know the subject or the period, they need to learn about it.  For example, one of my characters in The Garden of Martyrs was based loosely on a French priest named Jean Cheverus, who survived the French Revolution’s “September Massacres” of 1792 and came to America.  I knew very little about the period or about the inner lives of priests, so I had to read much.  I was teaching at a Jesuit University at the time and would talk over lunch with several priests, about their daily lives, their thoughts and feelings. By the end, I felt comfortable enough to write about this topic and this priest.

When did you start writing?

As I mentioned I came to writing—and reading—late.  But instead of starting the way most writers do with short stories, I jumped in the deep end.  I wrote in succession two pretty bad novels.  What it did teach me, however, was the discipline of writing a long narrative.  I was going to college full-time and working 30 hours a week pumping gas or working as a security guard in a defense industry factory, and I’d either get up early and write, or write when I came home.  Though it was only an hour a day, it did get me in the habit of writing, of thinking like a writer—looking at the world as an on-going story filled with possibilities.  While nothing of note came from those early years of writing, I learned to feel that I was a writer.

Has your education helped you become a better writer?

My undergraduate and Master’s in literature allowed me to read widely, and to catch up on the reading I had missed growing up.  But I can’t say that the earlier part of my education helped me as a writer.  I learned the craft of fiction when I entered my Ph.D. program with a specialty in creative writing.  I had never taken a creative writing course before this (big mistake). In my very first workshop with John Williams, who won the National Book Award, I learned the most basic things about the craft of fiction, like scene management, dialogue, character development, use of backstory, and the importance of conflict.  I recall being terribly anxious  before the workshop, being in the class of a National Book Award winner, and afterwards embarrassed that I didn’t know some of the most basic things about writing fiction.  But over the next three years I would learn a great deal and I was able to apply it to my fiction.  Before I left the program I had published a number of short stories in journals.  Within a couple of years after the leaving grad school, I was able to publish 50 stories.  So while my literature education was not directly helpful, my Ph.D. degree was extremely so.

Do you come to your writing through a particular lens? I have a friend who emphasizes style over everything else, though this approach leads him to character development and plot. Do you sketch out the plot first and work out other aspects of the story in relation to that consideration? Do characters spring up in your mind asking you write their stories?

I mentioned earlier that for me story—the “what happened” part of the novel—begins the journey.  But after I sketch out a rough draft of the first third of the book (leaving the last two-thirds open), I focus on language and character, dialogue and description.  Every day I read and reread my prose, often thirty or forty pages that I’ve already written, before I move on to the next scene or part.  During this very fertile time of revising and rethinking and polishing what I’ve written, I also deepen my characters.  I begin to see and hear and feel them in ways I hadn’t at the beginning of the novel.  I know my characters more and more each day, particularly their inner landscape of thoughts and feelings.  At the same time, description of their outer landscape is also important to me.  Where are they? What does it look and feel like—whether it be a hospital bed of the dying Lyman in Skunktown, or town that the young Lyman grows up in. So, while my process starts with story, it soon becomes focused on language and character.

I’ve just finished reading Henry James’ The Portrait of a Lady again and have mixed feelings about the era and the characters. It’s difficult to read about Victorian morés from a 21st Century perspective. Not only do I need lenses that will give me a bi-cultural perspective, but I also feel squashed between a culture clash. Just after I finished with Portrait, I read a review of A. M. Homes’ latest book May We Be Forgiven in The New York Review of Books. One of her main characters says, (more…)

For many years I’ve been recording my dreams each morning and trying to grasp the messages they bring me from the depths. I subscribe to Jung’s view that dreams are messengers from the unconscious, both personal and collective. To ignore them is like refusing to open and read letters from beloved friends that come in the mail. Not spam. Not advertisements. But serious, heartfelt missives (more…)

When I was a child, the popular books for kids included the Nancy Drew mysteries, the Bobbsey Twins, and the Hardy Boys. I loved burying myself in these stories that involved other youth who were trying to find their place in the world. But I also had a passion for fairy tales. I found them at the center of each fat red volume of The Book of Knowledge that my parents had bought from a traveling book salesman. (more…)

Many of my poems reflect a continuing interest in perception and how we try to capture fleeting moments with language. The art that comes closest to what I’m trying to do in poetry is photography, the exploration of things in the world (and in ourselves) from various angles. The attempt to penetrate surfaces by using the very surfaces themselves. (more…)

As a young woman in the 50s growing up in Canada, I was intrigued by hockey and football. Baseball didn’t exist for me then. It hadn’t entered Canadian consciousness, and it would take some years before it did. I didn’t feel deprived. Hockey and football had much to offer at that time, including handsome, vigorous guys. (more…)

Jane Friedman, a publishing industry expert upon whom I rely for trustworthy information recently updated her very helpful guide to hybrid publishing. For anyone considering this publishing route, be sure to read this guide carefully as she outlines many of the warning signs when you consider signing with a hybrid publisher. I also recommend this list from ALLI, which analyzes the companies and individuals eager to help writers in all sorts of ways from editing to publishing to publicizing. This article in Publishers Weekly details the more successful hybrid publishers and their payment models. And finally, I always encourage writers to sign up for the regular emails from Authors Publish. Here is an article on what the author, Emily Harstone, calls the three kinds of publishing. To be clear, she does not distinguish between vanity and hybrid publishing.

But as a fiction writer, I always believe that “the devil is in the details” and so let me tell you the story of one writer’s experience with a hybrid publisher.

Geoffrey Douglas is an accomplished journalist and memoirist. You can sign up for his Substack newsletter, 5000 Bylines Later here. He modestly describes himself as “author and journalist, with six books and 100 or so magazine pieces behind me–about politics, people, gambling, migrants, murder, a town on fire, etc.” The five books he wrote before his current novel Love in a Dark Place, were all traditionally published, well-reviewed and one was turned into a movie. This novel certainly deserves to be. Kirkus Reviews calls it “…a moving, unflinching novel about human depravity, and the way love can coexist in its menacing presence… emotionally hard-hitting, with impressive psychological depth.”

However, when Geoffrey tried to interest an agent in this novel based on his real-life experiences in Atlantic City during the 1980’s, the heyday of corruption and criminality, he couldn’t get anybody to sign him on. Those who did take a look at the manuscript were unnerved by a white male author “daring” (irony all mine) to include a prostitute and a black boxer as two of the main characters, both seen through the eyes of the protagonist. (I could go off on a tangent about the politically correct atmosphere in publishing these days when writers are pushed to stay within their very narrow lanes and only write what they know personally. What happened to imagination? But I digress.) With the big 5 (as the traditional publishing companies are known) only reading manuscripts from agented writers, the doors to publishing the old-fashioned way are slamming shut. This has pushed writers like Geoffrey to seek other ways to get his work out to a wider audience and there are a multitude of companies eager to help writers frustrated with the current system. Some of these are reputable, others not so much. (Once again see the ALLI guide above.)

So, when I asked Geoffrey about his experience with a hybrid publisher, he gave me this overall view of Greenleaf, the company he worked with.

For me, there were two sides to the coin. On the one hand, Greenleaf is a solid, very professional publisher. The editing, design and production of my book were all fabulous: professional, collaborative and endlessly helpful–more so than anything I ever experienced with the mainstream guys who published me before. And the final product is as fine as anything I could’ve hoped for.

The flip side: Although everyone I dealt with was very straightforward, and there was no dissembling as such, the system itself seems almost designed to obfuscate. The numbers you see on the front end are nothing like the final reality. You’re given a set of prices and a menu of options, most of which seem reasonable enough–but no mention is made initially of printing, warehouse storage, delivery to bookstores or a number of smaller services–so, probably like many other authors, I was blindsided by a lot of it. Some of their promotional options don’t seem worth the cost; and the print-run they recommended was far greater than what’s been sold so far or what I now anticipate. But because the number was more or less in line with my past experience with traditional publishers, and because it was their “professional recommendation,” I took the advice, and am now stuck with a monthly storage bill for more than 2,000 books—not to mention the original printing costs.

So my verdict is mixed. Great service, not so great communication. The system, as designed, is almost certain to include some pretty big potholes, even for the most cautious of us. It’s a textbook case of Buyer Beware. I didn’t beware nearly well enough, so that’s on me.

And here’s an assessment of Greenleaf by ALLI (Alliance of Independent Authors) which seems in line with Geoffrey’s experience.

High pressure sales and staggeringly high fees for add-on services tarnish an otherwise excellent service.

These days with the proliferation of pitfalls for writers and the come-ons from AI generated “publicists and editors” as I wrote about recently, it’s sadly become a game of “gotcha!”

I now feel compelled to add a note at the end of this post letting my readers know that this newsletter is and always will be “human authored.”

Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop (www.elizabethwinthropalsop.com) is the author of over 50 works of fiction for adults and children under the pen name Elizabeth Winthrop.  These include the award-winning fantasy series, The Castle in the Attic and The Battle for the Castle as well as the short story, The Golden Darters, read on the nationwide radio program, Selected Shorts, and included in Best American Short Story anthology, and Island Justice and In My Mother’s House, two novels now available as eBooks.  She is the daughter of the acclaimed journalist, Stewart Alsop. Daughter of Spies: Wartime Secrets, Family Lies, a family history about her parents’ love affair during World War II and their marriage lived in the spotlight of Washington during the 1950s was published by Regal House, October 25, 2022.

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Since 2015, I’ve published four novels, one memoir, and two poetry collections. I tell you this, dear readers and writers, because for the past couple of weeks, I’ve been blasted by emails that are clearly AI generated. Individuals (or maybe robots) want to sell me their marketing services. Some offer access to major nationwide book clubs whose readers will gobble up my narratives. Others offer reviewers that will read and review my work in exchange for a “tip.” I’ve also had one who offered a complete marketing plan for generating more readers. (more…)

Writing has become such a part of my day that if I don’t get to it, I’m constantly distracted, as if I have a lover I’m thinking about. It’s like a siren’s call, pulling me away. My husband notices it. He comments on me seeming drifty. He’s right. I’m not fully there. As happened tonight. (more…)

I’m thinking today of timing—how important it is to success.  Timing and perseverance:  the two go together.  I’m also noticing the seasonal aspect of creativity, how cyclic it is.  That too is hard to grasp.  I want it all the time.  I’m afraid if it isn’t there, it won’t return.  But I need to remember that if I pursue my creative impulses, and if they’re in accordance with my abilities, then there will be success.  Maybe not financially, though that would be nice.  But I’ll experience the satisfaction of achieving what I’m capable of. (more…)

Thanks to Suzanne Sherman for sharing this post on memoir writing:

There were many standout messages in a webinar I attended this week by bestselling author Janet Fitch, hosted by Memoir Nation (www.memoirnation.com/about-memoir-nation). 

This is one of my favorites.

Fitch spoke about stimulating memory to recreate time and place. How to do that?

A clue: Stimulating memory stimulates something inside you as well. It is, as Fitch calls it, “a gateway to memory.”

In my memoir, which publishes in fall 2026, I needed to recreate time and place as far back as 1964, when I was four years old. Important events in the arc of my narrative occurred at that time. Fortunately, I have vivid glimpses of memory to draw from. Still, to build context I needed to write a fuller scene. I had to drop down and find sensory details to go beyond the facts I knew. Depending on facts alone would have resulted in a narrative telling about instead of a recreation of  to take readers there with me. 

That is where stimulating the gateway to memory comes in. The key to the gateway is sense impression.

To get sense impressions, you have to go “back there” and open to the information your senses have for you. This is particularly helpful if memory is absent for the time you’re writing about. 

You may have heard of method acting. Method acting is an emotion-oriented technique in acting used instead of action-based acting. With method acting, an actor aspires to encourage sincere and emotionally expressive performances by fully inhabiting the role of the character. 

Here, we have “method writing.” You need to fully inhabit the role of the character you’re writing about (yourself in an earlier time). If, for example, you’re writing a scene that takes place in a car on a hot day in an era before air-conditioning was common in cars, go take a ride in yours with the air-conditioning turned off to get a sense of being in that car you drove in. Roll down the window and get a feeling for that, get some language for it. This is a felt sense of the experience, or method writing. 

In my memoir there is a scene in 1964 that takes place in a forest. There is a second scene in a forest in 1974, also important in the story. To recreate time and place for both, I went to a forest when I was writing the book—nearly 50 and 60 years later—to get details for the scenes and stimulate memory of the times I was writing about. Sure, I know what a forest is, but what does morning light do inside of one? What scents come up on a summer breeze? How does pine duff sound underfoot?

Go to the gateway to memory as often as you need by visiting a similar scene in current time. And remember: the key to get in is the senses. 

About Suzanne

I’m dedicated to helping writers put their good words into the world.

– Suzanne Sherman

For 40 years, Suzanne has helped hundreds of writers find their voice, strengthen their skills, and complete their salable books. Her clients have published with Wiley & Sons, Chronicle Books, and Ten Speed Press, and others. Many have successfully self-published. Suzanne’s next memoir class is on Zoom, October 6-November 24 (suzannesherman.com/writing-life-memoir-workshop/). Her memoir publishes in fall 2026. For updates and preorders, sign up for her newsletter at suzanne@suzannesherman.com.

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The AI Generated Questions

and my answers…

As I wrote in a recent post, I was approached by a media company in the UK asking for an interview. This was the first of what has become a flood of AI generated emails from all over the web enticing writers to participate in what we’ve come to call a “pay to play” scheme. It goes like this. The writer (or rather AI) compliments you on your amazing book/writing career/ insights, etc. Here’s an example.

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Years ago, when I was first foraying into finding an agent, I was involved for several months with a small Canadian literary agency with one principal, a former practicing contract attorney (I’ll call her Virginia, though that isn’t her real name), and her associate Sandra, a woman who claimed to have years of experience in the New York publishing scene as an agent and editor. Before email became ubiquitous, ours was largely a relationship by mail—post cards, letters, faxes, and, occasionally, phone. (more…)

Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop believes Resistance often begins in art: WRITING NO MATTER WHAT!

Writing No Matter What

Resistance often begins in art

As we sit here the week before the US elections and to my mind, the most important election in my lifetime, I wonder as I often have in the past, what’s the point of continuing to write in the face of all that worries the world. I felt this way after 911 and during the pandemic and the feeling is coming back again. I’ve been doing lots of political work which has lifted my spirits because, for me, action is the only cure for despair. But I’ve developed a powerful case of what I call “creative anxiety.” It’s happened to me before and I’m sure it will again. I’ve been away from the novel I’m working on for over two weeks. My characters are calling to me from where I left them, mounted on horses, hiding in a thick forest, searching for a young woman who has fled a convent.

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Do cities enrich your writing? See what guest author ELIZABETH WINTHROP ALSOP has to say!

I’m grateful that I live in a big city where I am forced to rub up against people who are not like me.

On the subway, I sit next to human beings of all ages and skin colors and shapes. In the streets, I see people in wheelchairs, joyful children, panhandlers down on their luck, women in heels I couldn’t wear for half a block, and helmeted, gray-haired women on bikes weaving their way in and out of traffic. I say hello and introduce myself to the homeless man even though I don’t always drop money into his paper cup. I offer my subway seat to a father with a baby strapped to his front, and he declines with a grin. With my foot, I hold the elevator door for an older woman using a cane and in return, with an eye on my arms full of packages, she pushes the button for my floor.

While I wear a wide-brimmed straw hat in summer and earmuffs in the winter, they sport yarmulkes and fezzes and bike helmets and hijabs and their hair might be dyed all colors of the rainbow or they may have shaved it all or just half of it off. When I am wearing four layers against the cold, I can admire the younger generation’s bare tattooed skin or their muscular legs protruding from baggy shorts or swathed in tight leggings.

Do I know these people personally? No. Do they make me angry? Yes…when I’m groped in the subway or someone cuts in front of me in a line or steals my wallet when I’m not watching my purse. Do they scare me? Sometimes…when a person breaks into an angry harangue against the world in the middle of the sidewalk or rattles me with her disconnected stare in my subway car. Do they make me smile? Often…when they are dressed in wild costumes or carry a parrot on their shoulder or play their bagpipes on a street, ignored by most busy passersby.

 

Do they make me curious? Yes, when I can’t see what book they’re reading or when they are speaking a foreign language I don’t recognize or when they stop me on the street to ask me to contribute to a cause.

But, like these people or not, I can’t separate myself from them by getting in a car or hiding out in my apartment. Every time, I step on the bus or stride down the sidewalk to do an errand, I am in community with a slice of the world, and for that experience, I continue to be deeply grateful most especially because I’m a working writer.

In the city, I am constantly inspired by the whirl of humanity around me. A detail I note in my daily travels may make it into my novel and months later, not even I will remember the connection. It might be the green eyes of the barista who serves me a dirty chai in my favorite coffee shop or the close cropped beard of my neighbor which fits perfectly my description of the sly bailiff in my 14th Century castle. Just as artists usually have a sketchbook at hand, I carry a journal where I can scribble a quick description of people, places, weather, sounds, emotions. As Gustave Flaubert said, “the good God is in the detail” which has always meant to me, be as specific as you can, especially in fiction where the reader needs to feel welcomed and grounded from page one.

Day after day, I thank the city which enriches my writing because, to paraphrase Mary Oliver, it offers itself so completely to my imagination.

Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop (www.elizabethwinthropalsop.com) is the author of over 50 works of fiction for adults and children under the pen name Elizabeth Winthrop.  These include the award-winning fantasy series, The Castle in the Attic and The Battle for the Castle as well as the short story, The Golden Darters, read on the nationwide radio program, Selected Shorts,and included in Best American Short Story anthology, and Island Justice and In My Mother’s House, two novels now available as eBooks.  She is the daughter of the acclaimed journalist, Stewart Alsop. Daughter of Spies: Wartime Secrets, Family Lies, a family history about her parents’ love affair during World War II and their marriage lived in the spotlight of Washington during the 1950s was published by Regal House, October 25, 2022.

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Meet Valerie Nieman whose upcoming novel presents the Macbeth’s you’ve never known!

Valerie Nieman’s historical novel, Upon the Corner of the Moon, is now available for pre-order with the release set for March 2025. This is the story of the Macbeths you never knew, rightful rulers who united Scotland in the tumultuous 11th century. The second of the two ALBA books, The Last Highland King, will appear in 2027. In the Lonely Backwater, winner of the 2022 Sir Walter Raleigh Award, has been called “not only a page-turning thriller but also a complex psychological portrait of a young woman dealing with guilt, betrayal, and secrecy.” To the Bones, a horror/Appalachian/ ecojustice novel, was a finalist for the 2020 Manly Wade Wellman Award, and now has a sequel, Dead Hand. She is the author of three other novels, a short fiction collection, and three poetry books. A graduate of West Virginia University and Queens University of Charlotte, she has held state and NEA fellowships and is professor emerita of creative writing at NC A&T State University. (more…)

Thanks to guest author Susan Wadds’ evocative thoughts on the writing life!

Winner of The Writer’s Union of Canada’s Prose Contest in 2016, Susan Waddswork has appeared in carteblancheThe Blood Pudding, Room, Waterwheel Review, and many more. The first two chapters of her debut novel, What The Living Do, (Regal House Publishing, 2024), won the Lazuli Group’s Prose Contest, and were published in Azure Magazine. What the Living Do was a finalist for the 2024 Canadian Book Club Award. A graduate of the Humber School for Writers and a proud member of The Writers Union of Canada, Susan is a certified Amherst Writers and Artists (AWA) workshop facilitator. She lives on a quiet river on Williams Treaty land in traditional Anishinaabe territory with an odd assortment of humans and cats.

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Thanks to Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop for sharing her thoughts on “How One Book Can Lead to Another”: From Genealogy to Memoir

HOW ONE BOOK CAN LEAD TO ANOTHER

From Genealogy to Memoir

In 2007, I published Counting on Grace, a work of historical fiction that told the story of a 12-year-old mill worker, a girl who “doffed” the bobbins in a textile mill in North Pownal, Vermont. My character was inspired by this photograph of a textile worker, taken by Lewis Hine, the photographer who traveled all over America documenting the lives of children who worked long days in dangerous industries like coal mining, oyster shucking, glass blowing and textile factories to name a few. When I first saw the photograph in a Vermont museum, I didn’t want to know anything about the actual child in the picture. I simply used her weary face, her filthy smock and her dirty bare feet as an inspiration for my story.

But once the novel had moved to the copyediting stage, I began to wonder about the actual child, the one who inspired my story. Hine had listed her as Annie Laird, but when we couldn’t find an entry for a child by that name in the 1900 census, I realized that Hine probably couldn’t hear what she told him over the noise of the spinning frames. So with a bit of imagination, the help of a local genealogist/researcher and some deeper digging, we found Addie Card  and her older sister, Annie in that census.

In the end, with the help of her descendants, we pieced together Addie’s story. She married a fellow mill worker, had a child, divorced and ended up living across the border in New York State. She died at the age of 93, never knowing that her face appeared in a Reebok ad decrying child labor or on a 1998 postage stamp.

I made sure that the billboard on the former site of the mill in North Pownal listed her correct name as did the entry in the Library of Congress Hine collection.

A writer coming off a book can get distracted by the marketing and publicity work, but I’ve always maintained that even then, a writer is never not writing. So, when I found myself at the end of the story of Grace, I suddenly realized that I knew more about Addie Card than I did about my own mother. Without knowing where my research would lead me, I turned my attention to my Gibraltar-born mother, her childhood by the Mediterranean and in England, her life in London during the war and her marriage to my father, a Yank who enlisted in the British Army.

Books start long before the writer knows what she’s doing or where she’s going. I thought I was simply filling in the gaps in my mother’s story. She’d always kept her counsel and had seemed content to let my father’s big noisy American family garner all the attention. But as I began to learn more about her, I could feel a book taking shape, this time a memoir that would start with my mother’s peculiar childhood in Gibraltar and my parents’ wartime romance and go on to tell the story of my childhood in cold war Washington, where we were surrounded by famous politicians, diplomats and CIA operatives.

The problem was I’d never written a memoir before, so I had to learn a new way of using the tools of fiction. It took me longer than usual to find my voice in this book, to discover the difference between autobiography and memoir and to find a way to tell my mother’s story without letting hers overshadow mine. In Daughter of Spies: Wartime Secrets, Family Lies I learned to use a braided narrative, one that moves back and forth from the past to the present. Memoir requires structure but like most projects, including novels, the book teaches the writer what it’s about while she’s writing it.

And it’s only in looking back that I realize the exploration of my mother’s story began with a search for a little girl in Vermont whose photograph had become iconic but whose story had been tossed into the dustbin of history.

Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop (www.elizabethwinthropalsop.com) is the author of over 50 works of fiction for adults and children under the pen name Elizabeth Winthrop.  These include the award-winning fantasy series, The Castle in the Attic and The Battle for the Castle as well as the short story, The Golden Darters, read on the nationwide radio program, Selected Shorts, and included in Best American Short Story anthology, and Island Justice and In My Mother’s House, two novels now available as eBooks.  She is the daughter of the acclaimed journalist, Stewart Alsop. Daughter of Spies: Wartime Secrets, Family Lies, a family history about her parents’ love affair during World War II and their marriage lived in the spotlight of Washington during the 1950s was published by Regal House, October 25, 2022.

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Thanks to Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop for sharing her thoughts on “Writing places: Where do you do your best work?”

I’ve been on hiatus from my writing because of travel and family business. When I look back at the last date I entered in my writing journal, the one I keep along
side whatever work of fiction is occupying me these days, I’m not surprised to see it reads May 12th. I’ve been on the other side of the world and the other side of history from my characters who live half the time on the northeast coast of England in the 1940s and the other half in the same place in the 1400s.
No wonder, I’m finding it hard to get them talking to me again. So how do I jumpstart the process?

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Read guest author David Roth’s thoughtful & thought provoking comments on writing narrative!

David Roth’s bio:

David received his undergraduate Communication degree from Stanford University. After moving to New York City to pursue a career in documentary film production, he began MA studies in Creative Writing at New York University, which included a course with his first literary hero E. L. Doctorow. He took a leave of absence after a semester to focus on supporting his growing family. That leave lasted thirty-five years and was primarily spent writing and/or directing and/or producing business communications. (more…)

Thanks to Ellen Birkett Morris, author of BEWARE THE TALL GRASS, for taking readers behind the scenes of her writing process!

Ellen Birkett Morris is the author of Beware the Tall Grass, winner of the Donald L. Jordan Award for Literary Excellence, and Lost Girls: Short Stories, winner of the Pencraft Award. Morris is also the author of Abide and Surrender, poetry chapbooks. Her fiction has appeared in Shenandoah, Antioch Review, Notre Dame Review, and South Carolina Review, among other journals. Morris is a recipient of an Al Smith Fellowship for her fiction from the Kentucky Arts Council (more…)

I’m delighted to join Mimi Herman, author of the Kudzu Queen, A Field Guide to Human Emotions, and Logophilia, in this engaging conversation about her writing life

Mimi Herman is the author of The Kudzu Queen, A Field Guide to Human Emotions, and Logophilia. Her novel The Kudzu Queen was selected by The North Carolina Center for the Book for the 2023 Library of Congress “Great Reads from Great Places” program and longlisted for the Center for Fiction First Novel Prize. Her writing has appeared in LitHub, Michigan Quarterly Review, Shenandoah, Crab Orchard Review and many other journals. Mimi is a member of the Board of Directors for the Association of Writers & Writing Programs, a Kennedy Center Teaching Artist, a Warren Wilson MFA alumna, and a Hermitage Artist Retreat Fellow. She directs weeklong Writeaways writing workshops in France, Italy, Ireland, New Mexico and online. For more information visit her at www.mimiherman.com andwww.writeaways.com.

 

As people learned about your book, what unexpected things happened along the way?

The Kudzu Queen has brought the world to my door—and to my inbox—in ways I never anticipated. Since publication, I’ve rediscovered friends from childhood, high school, college, grad school and beyond, who write to tell me their favorite characters, to give me chapter-by-chapter updates on their reading, to invite me to their book groups. I used to go to the library and think: there are millions of books here, thousands no one ever reads, so why bother? To have people say that they’re reading my book—and loving it—is a gift beyond anything I imagined.

Do you neglect personal hygiene or housekeeping to write? Or vice versa?

Housekeeping? What’s that? Oh, right, that’s the thing I spend two days doing before I have people over for dinner or a party. Or the thing I do when the writing isn’t going well, and I need to create order somewhere, even if it’s not appearing on the page. I’m an overachiever, so the problem with housekeeping and me is that I’ll start out cleaning the bathtub, and end up replacing the plumbing. As for personal hygiene, you’ll be relieved to know that I tend to keep that up pretty well, no matter how the writing is going.

What writing mistakes do you find yourself making most often?

After all these years of writing, you’d think I’d learn to write a book in order, instead of creating an eighteen-foot smorgasbord of scenes and then trying to organize it into a four-course meal of a novel.

Why should people want to read your books?

I’m not a great advocate of “shoulds,” but I like the idea of people reading my books because I listen to characters with the same interest and affection that I have for actual people. My goal is always to understand who my characters really are, in all their complexities and quirks, and to help their stories live in the world in ways that allow readers to understand their own lives.

What do you read that people wouldn’t expect you to read? What’s the trashiest book you’ve ever read?

I’m a cyberfiction geek. Two of my favorite writers of all time are William Gibson and Neal Stephenson. Check out Gibson’s Pattern Recognition and Stephenson’s REAMDE!I also love mysteries. As for the trashiest book I’ve ever read, suffice it to say that yes, I read trash. When I first started writing fiction, I considered myself the original plotless wonder, and I figured out that trashy fiction is great for learning how to write plot. Or maybe that’s just an excuse for the fact that sometimes I need to crawl into bed and indulge in a delicious diet of literary bonbons.

Are you fluent in any other languages? If so, do you find that knowledge has any effect on your writing? Is it important for people to learn other languages? Why?

Fluent, no, but I learned French and Hebrew by the age of 14. I also studied Latin for four years in high school and Sign Language for two in college. Since then I’ve Duolingoed my way back to French and ventured into Italian. I think knowing languages can be useful in understanding how other people think. It’s not just the vocabulary, but also the syntax, the way people from different nationalities organize words in a sentence. For writers, having a familiarity in a second language lets you to consider the connotations and derivations of the words you use. Plus, learning a language teaches you to listen, an essential skill in writing good dialogue.

What surprising skills or hobbies do you have?

I love building—and rebuilding. My house is turning 100 years old this year, and over the time I’ve lived here, I’ve built kitchen cabinets and countertops, installed two sinks and three toilets, refinished floors, built a deck, designed and soldered a copper wineglass rack, and patched and painted almost every wall in the house.

Has your education helped you become a better writer?

Absolutely, and by that I mean my education at all levels. My wonderful 4th grade teacher, Miss Stevens, got me started with poetry. And my 6th grade teacher, Mrs. Williams, let me design an extra credit project, writing a book of animal poems.

In high school at Carolina Friends School, I got to do all the arts—writing, acting, making art, dancing, singing—and fell in love with learning. This made me a better writer and, I hope, a better teacher and human being. Throughout my professional life I’ve tried to make learning as magical for my students as it was for me.

In college I was lucky enough to be mentored by Max Steele and Doris Betts, who taught me how to write (Doris with her beautiful calligraphed “Don’t turn off the picture” in the margins of pages of unmitigated dialogue) and how to feel safe and comfortable in the presence of someone I admire (hours spent in Max’s comfortable office armchair, talking about writing and the fact that characters in student fiction never seem to have to do things like pay the rent or buy groceries).

And in the Warren Wilson MFA Program for Writers, I had the gift of four brilliant mentors: Richard Russo, Robert Boswell, C. J. Hribal and Charles Baxter. Do you have hours? Because that’s how long it would take me to describe all I learned from these amazing writers and teachers—and dancers! Dances at Warren Wilson were legendary, and have led—I’d like to believe—to a sense of balance and risk in my own writing.

How long did it take you to write your book?

When I first started talking about The Kudzu Queen, in podcasts and other interviews, I remembered that I’d been working on it off and on for a long time. Sixteen years or so, I thought. But late last summer I came across my very first handwritten pages—some of which are actually in the completed book—and realized I began writing it in August 1994!

Of course, while writing this book, I did a few other things: published a couple collections of poetry and a nonfiction book, designed and directed Poetry Out Loud for the state of North Carolina, became a Kennedy Center Teaching Artist, taught over 20,000 students and teachers, and cofounded Writeaways writing workshops in France, Italy, Ireland and New Mexico. But the book got its start, well…quite some time ago.

What’s next for you?

I’m currently working on my next novel, set in Ireland in the mid-1980s, which involves a young American woman just out of college, a missing child, and a drag queen named Holly Unlikely.

 

Thanks to Elizabeth Winthrop Alsop for sharing “A WRITER IS NEVER NOT WRITING”

A Writer is Never Not Writing

On the road with my imagination

One of the best things about being a writer is that you can take your work with you no matter where you go. Of course, this is true now for lots of jobs because of Zoom and the internet and the acceptance of hybrid work.  But a writer has always been able to work anywhere because all we need are a few transportable tools (pen and paper even) and our imaginations.

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I’m delighted to host author Michael Bourne on my blog today. He reveals the journey he took to writing his first novel. Join him!

Michael Bourne is the author of Blithedale Canyon, published by Regal House in 2022. He is a long-time contributing editor at Poets & Writers Magazine, and he has written for the New York Times, the Globe & Mail, The Economist, Literary Hub, and Salon. His fiction has appeared in more than a dozen literary magazines including, most recently, december, The Southampton Review, and Tin House. Blithedale Canyon is his first novel. He grew up in Northern California and now lives in Vancouver, Canada, with his wife and son.

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Welcome to Guest Author Evonne Marzouk, whose novel THE PROPHETESS reveals how the main character unveils her visionary self!

Meet Evonne Marzouk, today’s guest author:

Evonne Marzouk is an inspirational public speaker and author of The Prophetess. Her work has also been published in Newsweek, the Washington Post, the Jewish News Syndicate, The Wisdom Daily, the Jewish Telegraphic Agency, RitualWell and many other publications. She recently co-authored a chapter on “The Heroine’s Journey” in the book Jewish Fantasy Worldwide (2023) and offers a free printable Heroine’s Journal on her website to empower all women to live their greatest dreams. IG/FB: @heroinewhisperer

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Multi-genre Guest UK author Tony Flood joins me today & shares his journey as an author

Tony Flood spent most of his working life as a journalist, initially on local and regional papers and then on nationals. He was also editor of ‘Football Monthly’, Controller of Information at Sky Television and enjoyed a spell with ‘The People’ before retiring in 2010. In his celebrity book My Life With The Stars, Tony recalls: “My work

as a showbiz and leisure writer, critic and editor saw me take on a variety of challenges — learning to dance with Strictly Come Dancing star Erin Boag, becoming a stand-up comedian, and playing football with the late George Best and Bobby Moore in charity matches.” Tony now spends much of his time writing books and theatre reviews, as well as playing veterans football. He says: “I must be one of the oldest — and slowest — players in the country!”

More details about Tony and his wife and fellow author Heather Flood — andspecial book offers — are available on the websites:
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From finding book titles to unearthing characters, author Robert Archambeau’s humor zings in this interview with him!

Meet Robert Archambeau, today’s guest author:

Robert Archambeau possesses the world’s least interesting international identity. Of French-Canadian ancestry, he was born in Rhode Island, raised in Canada, and spent summers in Maine or at his father’s art studio on a lake in the Canadian wilderness. An art school brat, he always felt it was inevitable that he would end up making art, or at least movies, but his fate was grimmer still. After a brief stint as a deck hand and grotesquely underqualified ship’s engineer, he fell in with a group of poets and pursued graduate studies in English at the University of Notre Dame. While studying for his PhD, he ran off to Chicago, got married on a sailboat in Burnham Harbor, and worked as a clerk in a secondhand bookstore. Here, sitting at the long counter in the Aspidistra Bookshop, he wrote his doctoral dissertation on Wordsworth, as well as many of the poems that would make up of his first collection of verse, Home and Variations. (more…)

Meet guest author Michelle Cameron who unveils the mysteries of historical fiction and the writer’s life!

Michelle Cameron is the author of Jewish historical fiction, including Babylon: A Novel of Jewish Captivity, the award-winning Beyond the Ghetto Gates and The Fruit of Her Hands: the story of Shira of Ashkenaz. She has also published a verse novel, In the Shadow of the Globe. Napoleon’s Mirage, the sequel to Beyond the Ghetto Gates, is forthcoming in August 2024.

Michelle is a director of The Writers Circle, a NJ-based creative writing program serving children, teens, and adults. She lives in Chatham, NJ, with her husband and has two grown sons of whom she is inordinately proud.

Visit her online:

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